Editing- Good pace, take the edge off production logo. Complete. Dramatic cuts- no rain on the streets, need music over the titles, good long take up the stairs. Longer shot of shadow would have been better if Hayley was moving, photos could look better with a frame and a white flash in between. the zoom onto a photo of Hayley is too quick. The title at the end could be moved to the end of the crime photos, using a camera shutter noise.
Sound (inc. Music)- Good use of diagetic sound i.e. footsteps, Majority of music doesn't correspond (doesn't flow), good link with weather e.g. rain and thunder, TOO MUCH SOUND!!!
Camerawork- Good range of camera shots that kept the audience interested, camera movement was kept at a steady pace, camera angles introduced the characters well, gave the audience an idea of who the protagonist was.Too improve use less shaking when using handheld.
Mise en Scene- The jukebox is really cool, use of costume is good, Protagonist jacket was good and shows that he was well kept, cannot comment on victims clothing.
Titles- striking! good flashing, big and bold, need to keep them there for a longer amount of time.
Thriller conventions- Normally the criminal is unknown and not supposed to be revealed in the opening sequence, women are seen as vulnerable - nice one! Really eye-catching, credits were appropriate, ordinary situation, build up of suspense, viewer placed in position of voyeur, centre's around crime.
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