- Continuity of the editing could be improved, from shot to shot, the transitions could be smoother creating a more natural effect.
- Hayley's death looked unrealistic and unnatural.
- Variation of sound a bit too much, taking away from the effects natural sound can have.
- Titles over exaggerated especially with the sound of thunder, could be displayed in the actual film.
- Soundtrack cuts in and out, maybe a continuous soundtrack throughout the sequence would be more effective.
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