in order to create the best opening sequence possible we had teachers and peers watch our draft and feedback on possible improvements that could be made or elements that could be changed, the crucial withdrawals from this task included:
- the establishing shot of the house was not long enough, and therefore did not fully portray the mysterious image and immediate setting we intended.
- An increased use of non-diagetic sounds would create a more suspenseful atmosphere like we desired.
These criticisms provide us with the information we wanted o further improve our thriller opening sequence and we will be using them as influence whilst we edit and moderate our sequence.
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